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Ebony lies in your Heart
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Ebony Heart
« Thread Started on May 24, 2009, 5:32pm »

Player Information
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Screen name:
blustreak56
Age:
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Current Characters:
Ebony
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Basics
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Character Name:
~~Salem Bacia~~ Ebony Zaffira Heart
DOB:
January 5, 1990
Age:
18
Gender:
Female
Zodiac Symbol:
Capricorn
Chinese Zodiac:
Horse

Character Position[Good/Neutral/Evil]:
Good

Character Personality(5 sentences please):
She is very strong but does not like to show that to other people. She likes to show a very carefree side. No one likes a worrywart. she may be very care fee on the out side but inside she is a paranoid freak.

War can do that to a girl. She has lived on Earth for a long time now but she still can't shake the feeling that some one may attack her out of no where. To help relax her paranoia she parties a lot. More then your normal 18 year old.
Sleep.
Party.
Boys.
That is pretty much Ebony Heart for you.

Character Appearance
Height -
She is some what short for her age, but don't tell her that. 5ft 3in.
Hair color -
She has dark brown hair to the point where you can not tell if it is black or brown. In the sunlight it has a red tint and in the moonlight it has a blue tint.
Eye color -
Bright blue.
Build -
she is between built and scrawny. No other way to explain it.
Clothing -
Always something that shows off as much of her body with out being to slutty.

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Is Character from Game?
No.
If so which one?
None
Race:
~~Sailor Princess~~ Sailor Fighter from Saturn. (Is that a race?)
Home Planet:
Saturn

Attacks :
Her one and only attack is to blood bend. She can blood bend others blood but never does because she thinks it is a horrible thing to do.

Abilities :
Her special abilities include:
~Healing others wounds with her own blood. (This tends to weaken her though).
~She can also seduce people -guys- into doing what she wants.
~Her last ability is forgiving easily. she can forgive easily because if she did not forgive she would have no one to talk to and she loves to talk.

Weapon(s):
~Swords.
~Bow and arrow.

Attack Power [Choose from the scale below for EACH attack]:
Weakest - 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 - Strongest
Blood bending / healing is around nine. Every time she uses it she loses her own blood. she may heal faster them others because of the healing power in her blood but it still takes a lot out of her.

Story

Character History :
History? Sure she has a history and she knows it. Will she share it with anyone?
No.
Her past is hers and no one else's and she would like to keep it that way. And why look to the past when we are heading for the future.

Now I will tell you what I know of her history, but if you tell her I told you are so dead.
Long ago on the planet of Saturn Ebony was born. She was raised as a princess until she turned 13 and realized she had no reason to remain a princess. She cut her hair and joined the army to help her planet fight in any war that she thought was worth fighting in.

To get into the army she did more then just cut her hair. She also faked her death. She took a pill that made it seem like she was dead and once she was in the tomb she snuk out to join the army under Ebony Heart.

After a few years in the army she came to Earth to relax. That is how she got to where she is today. (Again do not tell her I told you).

Sample Post:
This is one I wrote from another site but I hope it works if not I will write a new for you.

Maddie was running to get to the nearest girls bathroom. She was hoping she would make it in time before she burst. She finally got to one ran in and went strait to a stall. When she was done she came out and washed her hands, only then did she notice the girl who was in there with her. "Hi sorry about not noticing you before. I just really had to go." She said and then smiled and laughed at her own stupidity.

She then noticed the girl had been crying. "Are you OK what happened." She asked. While waiting for an answer she walked over to get a paper towel to dry her hands. Once they were dry she stuck her hand out and offered it to the girl. "My name is Maddie Rain. What is your name? And sorry if I asked a personal question you do not have to answer if you do not want to. But if you do I am always up for a story." She then took a deep breath she always talked way to much.

« Last Edit: May 25, 2009, 12:48pm by Ebony lies in your Heart »

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Re: Ebony lies with in all our Hearts ~Done~
« Reply #1 on May 25, 2009, 11:14am »

Okay first off it should not be centered and the font shoud not be a color other than the preset for the site (in this case it should stay white). Also the font size was played with. Plase do NOT play with the template or change the way we had it the start with. I sugesst you look over one of my finished characters to see the way it should look.

The title should be the character's name first and last or her full name.You need to proofread there are mispelled words, there is a spell check option.

Two words are not considered a senance.

Please attach the drawback sentance to the attack like so:

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Her one and only attack is to blood bend. She can blood bend others blood but never does because she thinks it is a horrible thing to do. Every time she uses it she loses her own blood and it weakens her.

I cannot read the rest of this since the lavender font color is making my eyes hurt. I will finish the reviewafter you have changed the template back tothe way it is suposed to look.

EDIT:
There are a few gramatcal errors, but its not very important. So this app has been ACCEPTED

« Last Edit: May 26, 2009, 12:24pm by Vexen| DB [admin] »

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